Legend of Zelda - Trip to the beach - lines

Description: This is an old sketch from ‘03. It’s supposed to be Link and Zelda from Legend of Zelda: Ocarina of Time on a beach in Hyrule. As you can see, I never got around actually drawing the beach. Do not to worry, through. This is for one, one of the sketches I plan to ink in Photoshop and eventually color. Actually, I was in the progress of inking this in Photoshop, when after many hours of detail work the file ended up being corrupted and I unable to save it.

This sketch doesn’t give you a proper impression of what I’m capable of today. This is a rather boring and dull sketch done years ago. Look in my gallery to get a better impression of what I can do the day today.

BEFORE YOU COMMENT:
Believe it or not, I’m not really interested in short lame meaning less comments such as ”nice”, ”sweet”, ”nice boobs” etc. I get comments like these several times a day and they’re useless to me. I really do appreciate when you comment and you should feel free to do so. However, for my sake when you comment at least give the time to write something a bit more taste- and useful.
This may be hard to believe too, but I’m not interested in lame comments were you decide to waste both your and my time with ridiculous comments just to flame or bash my drawing style. I draw in my own way with my own style - none of my art is supposed to be photo realistic, so please avoid comments about boob size, head size, eye size etc. - they’re drawn like that for a reason and I DO know if I draw big boobs or eyes as it is I (surprise!) that drew them.
Give me constructive critique only! Comments such as ”Her boobs look ridiculous”, ”Her face needs detail” or ”Her hands/feet look wrong” is NOT considered constructive critique and is NOT helpful! If you want to help me please pinpoint the problem and suggest to me how you THINK I could improve the drawing. Don’t try to correct my drawing style to suit your preferred style better.